Critisize artwork

Umm.. umm.. so, critisize my artwork here?
All feedback will be read.
And of course, obey the forum rules.

You can also put your own art here to be critisized.

I'll try to keep this first post updated with my artwork.



Practise. I think first one's tail is best, but last one's my favourite of these.

Wow, thats a very nice sprite. The shading is very good, in my opinion. I'm no true artists, but that is very good in my eye.

My crits::
The first one should have larger flippers and eyes to make it more baby-esque. Or shrink it's body down.
The second one the anatomy is awkward, especially the head. My suggestion is to look up pictures and skeletons of whatever you plan to draw.
The third one is flipping adorable and I want to hug it! but the head outline ruins the connection of the head to the body. Perhaps removing 4 or 5 dark gray pixels where the back of the head towards the front and body connect.

I love your coloring skills and your work is very cute ^-^

*SS*: Thank you! BTW, Check your PM if you haven't yet. : D

Kit: To be honest I used pictures to draw these, but the seconds anatomy is still bad.
Good idea for the third.
And thank you. ^^

I got the PM.

All that I can crit has been taken.

Can you guys crit this one? :O (The brown girl was very poorly drawn - I'm gonna hafta redo her, also, yes, the edges suck XD)

I like how you have made those snakes /dragons. That green on them is bit pale, but maybe its best that way. I also like very much shadings of that white girl and how you make her glow.
I think all colors except that pale green fit together but its just my opinion.